Feedbacks on my Poems

Gowri, please go through a posting that you had made during our first month of blogging (Sep 2007)

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Suchoo,Your poem "Nich-Salanam" was really good. Phrasing the words and even above that, your flow of thoughts were astonishing. You are gifted. Ensure that you are saving and preserve all the poems that you write. We may have to publish it one day !!(..... typing the following after having spoken to you on tele.......)Yep, I am getting this poem posted to my office id, to check what others feel about this poem.-Gowri..

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Not sure if you had any feedbacks. Some times people do not bother to give feedbacks when they are timid natured and dont intend to hurt the poets !!

Well, as you know, now I have a collection of around 35 poems ...weeding out 2 dozen of them which are sub optimal / too personalised that "others" cannot appreciate it, I still have a dozen poems that I feel proud about.

Before this pride turns into head weight (tending to walk briskly like Bharathiyaar, huh ??), I wish to take feedbacks of some free lancers. I already gave a sample (5, I guess) to Bhanu Attimber but do not have the guts to "ask" for feedbacks...(you see, relationship is more important than feedbacks).

When I come home for my next vacation, will send you a ppt containing the best 12 ones putting them in some logical order / making a proper index and hyperlinking them together). May be you should get some feedbacks. Note, still I would like to have feedbacks only from some simple people AND honestly feel bit scary about approaching "poets - the real thing !!"

So, my chennai to do list is going up by one more...Hmmm.....!!

Suchoo